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l*******8
发帖数: 133 | 1 Dear Chief Consul,
My name is Lian Xi and I’m doing my XXX internship in the United States. I
’m writing this letter to invite my mother,XXX, to visit me and enjoy the
beautiful summer here.
My parents have been working hard and I’m planning for a long time for an
exotic trip outside Asia as a reward. I got 16 vacation days (10 day paid
vacation + 6 day weekends not including any national holidays) and I also
saved some money from this internship. It is a perfect time to invite them
over, enjoy the beautiful East Coast, and if we have time, California as
well.
My parents have enough savings to pay for my mother’s trip, which costs
approximately $3,000. I will also partly finance her trip using my stipends
to the extent I can. I hoped both of my parents could come and stay for a
while, but unfortunately my father is too busy to come.
I’m the person who’s responsible of planning for my mom’s trip and I will
fetch her at the airport. If you have any question, please do not hesitate
to contact me at XXX I’m returning China to start my exchange study in XXX
University in September to continue my study. We have no intention of
remaining in the United States.
Here is the list of documents I have for your reference:
Copy of my acceptance letter
Copy of my DS-2019 and DS-7002 forms
Copy of my Passport, Visa, I-94, Driver’s license and Vehicle title
Copy of my W-2 Wage and Tax Statement
Copy of my student status certificate and my transcript
Copy of the acceptance letter to XXX University
Thank you very much for your time and I appreciate your kindness and help!
麻烦看一下有问题没有，还是这些材料齐了吗？太感谢啦 | E********e
发帖数: 1734 | 2 "I’m writing this letter to invite my mother,XXX, to visit me and enjoy the
beautiful summer here."这句话是邀请你妈妈，为什么称呼是签证官？需要修改吧。
“I will fetch her at the airport.”这句话比较多余吧。 | l*******8
发帖数: 133 | 3 这是给签证官看得.我还要另写一封邀请我妈过来?
the
【在 E********e 的大作中提到】
: "I’m writing this letter to invite my mother,XXX, to visit me and enjoy the
: beautiful summer here."这句话是邀请你妈妈，为什么称呼是签证官？需要修改吧。
: “I will fetch her at the airport.”这句话比较多余吧。
| E********e
发帖数: 1734 | 4 对不起，我刚才没说清楚。
我意思是，你这封信肯定是写给签证官的，但是第一段应该是：我叫西联，我写这封信
是为了告诉您我想邀请我妈妈来美国...而不是说，我叫西联，我写这封信是为了邀请
我妈妈来美国...
你写信的目的是想告诉签证官你邀请你妈妈，而不是用这封信邀请你妈妈。
用不着再给你妈妈写邀请信。
【在 l*******8 的大作中提到】
: 这是给签证官看得.我还要另写一封邀请我妈过来?
:
: the
| l*******8
发帖数: 133 | 5 谢啦.您看信里别的内容有啥问题没?
【在 E********e 的大作中提到】
: 对不起，我刚才没说清楚。
: 我意思是，你这封信肯定是写给签证官的，但是第一段应该是：我叫西联，我写这封信
: 是为了告诉您我想邀请我妈妈来美国...而不是说，我叫西联，我写这封信是为了邀请
: 我妈妈来美国...
: 你写信的目的是想告诉签证官你邀请你妈妈，而不是用这封信邀请你妈妈。
: 用不着再给你妈妈写邀请信。
| E********e
发帖数: 1734 | 6 内容没啥问题。但是读完之后很平淡，没有激情。
【在 l*******8 的大作中提到】
: 谢啦.您看信里别的内容有啥问题没?
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