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h****a
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黄西10月初在旧金山Punchline俱乐部的表演引起轰动,演出后还有一群粉丝追着他到
旅馆内聊天。 (美国《世界日报》/刘晓莉摄影)
黄西搞笑肢体语言多。(美国《世界日报》/刘晓莉摄影)
据美国《世界日报》报道,继在戴维.莱特曼秀 (David Letterman Show)用英语讲
美式笑话一炮走红后,华裔搞笑艺人(stand-up comedian)黄西继续又受邀上了两次美
国著名节目主持人艾伦(Ellen DeGeneres)的节目,好事连连不断,他近日又再被美国
主流媒体“电台电视记者协会”(Radio Television Correspondents Association)邀
请前往到明年3月的年会,在美国总统奥巴马跟前与美国各大媒体的记者前搞笑。
明年春,那一场被称为“华府奥斯卡夜”的美国总统与重要媒体的联谊晚宴,将在
C-SPAN 电视频道全程播出,假使黄西的15分钟笑话能让美国总统奥巴马与在场名记者
喷饭,他一定是隔日美国各大媒体争相报道的明日之星。
黄西在10月6日与7日曾在旧金山 Punchline 搞笑俱乐部(Punchline Comedy Club)
a***c
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来自主题: Military版 - 一個黃西不會講的笑話 [原創]
上周末筆者有幸跟黃西喝杯咖啡, 閒聊一下, 談大陸談美國談香港, 東扯西扯最後又扯
到stand-up comedy.
aspec: 老黃啊, 你們行家之間好像有個in-joke叫做the aristocrats對吧, 你有想過
如果有朝一日你要表演這個, 你會怎樣演繹這個經典笑話呢?
joe: 啊, 這個很困難啊, 一來我不講黃色笑話, 二來...
aspec: 二來怎樣呢?
joe: 二來我的東西一向很寫實, 就算是要很shocking的還是要貼近生活吧
aspec: 中國大陸的生活應該可以找到素材吧?
joe: 找到是找到, 還是海量呢, 而且又寫實又夠shock value
aspec: 那還有什麼問題?
joe: 那個punchline我說不出口啊
aspec: punchline就說"大陸人"來代替"aristocrats"不就好了嗎?
joe: ... (百感交集, 哭笑不得)
so what do call an act like that? "The mainlanders, ta da!"
q***q
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握手... "但愿人长久"是我非常喜欢的一个punchline(当然这首词里简直是充满了
punchline),反复咀嚼的话就像是说"祝愿世界和平"一样,同时具有美好向往和无奈现
实的混杂情绪。这也是我反复吟唱的原因啊。
a***c
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【 以下文字转载自 Military 讨论区 】
发信人: aspec (3 dollar bill), 信区: Military
标 题: 一個黃西不會講的笑話 [原創]
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Jul 22 04:33:48 2011, 美东)
上周末筆者有幸跟黃西喝杯咖啡, 閒聊一下, 談大陸談美國談香港, 東扯西扯最後又扯
到stand-up comedy.
aspec: 老黃啊, 你們行家之間好像有個in-joke叫做the aristocrats對吧, 你有想過
如果有朝一日你要表演這個, 你會怎樣演繹這個經典笑話呢?
joe: 啊, 這個很困難啊, 一來我不講黃色笑話, 二來...
aspec: 二來怎樣呢?
joe: 二來我的東西一向很寫實, 就算是要很shocking的還是要貼近生活吧
aspec: 中國大陸的生活應該可以找到素材吧?
joe: 找到是找到, 還是海量呢, 而且又寫實又夠shock value
aspec: 那還有什麼問題?
joe: 那個punchline我說不出口啊
aspec: punchline就說"大陸人"來代替"arist... 阅读全帖
t****z
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来自主题: Military版 - 2011年Super Bowl广告得分
Eminem was everywhere in this year when it came to Super Bowl advertising,
starring the night’s other A+ advertisement for Chrysler:
A+ Audi
More along the lines of an A- was the clever yet abrasive Lipton Brisk Ice
Tea claymation specials:
Budwiser had the horses, as per usual, but also Peter Stormare and a “Tiny
Dancer” punchline, which we’ll allot a B+:
Another B+ goes to Snickers, primarily from releasing us from Betty White
and Abe Vigoda (one would hope):
Anytime you can feature a beaver s... 阅读全帖
c******n
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【 以下文字转载自 LosAngeles 讨论区 】
发信人: chairman ( 8====o ~~ /*\), 信区: LosAngeles
标 题: 美国人对中国人游行抗议的看法
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun Nov 10 02:23:13 2013, 美东)
http://www.scpr.org/news/2013/11/09/40291/asian-americans-prote
The punchline came when he interviewed the Asian-American child. He was
making fun of the infantile mentality of jingoistic American pundits and
sadly, way too many Americans. Too bad too many Americans (and Chinese) are
too stupid to see it. He wasn't demeaning Chinese, he was demeaning
stup... 阅读全帖
g**1
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来自主题: Military版 - 美国国务院指控俄国dirty trick ZT
http://youtu.be/jW1WDbDX7wE
If there was any doubt whether the intercepted "Fuck the EU" phone call
between Assistant Secretary of State Nuland and the US Ambassador to the
Ukraine Pyatt was authentic, it can now be laid to rest: in an earlier
response to questions from reporters, State Department spokeswoman Jen Psaki
did not dispute authenticity of recording and essentially confirmed it was
real "I didn’t say it was inauthentic."
However, in the tried and true fashion of assigning blame elsewh... 阅读全帖
x******g
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对这种本身就是一个反种族歧视的玩笑都这么敏感,美国的亚洲人没救了。这个Ching-
Chong Ding-Dong Suey Park是个韩国女吧?
我觉得挺好笑的。
如果亚洲人对形容东方语音的Ching-Chong Ding-Dong觉得是侮辱,那么土著印第安人
对red skin这个词忍了多久啊?
Washington (AFP) - Social media erupted in outrage and counter-attacks
Friday after US comedian Stephen Colbert used language that mocked Asian
Americans in what was intended as an anti-racist jibe.
Colbert, who is liberal but parodies a blustery conservative on his late
night talk show, took aim at the Washington Redskins football team whose
nam... 阅读全帖
b********n
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【 以下文字转载自 USANews 讨论区 】
发信人: beijingren (to thine own self be true), 信区: USANews
标 题: 前中央情报局局长说,军方将反抗床铺
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun Feb 28 19:28:26 2016, 美东)
“I would be incredibly concerned if a President Trump governed in a way
that was consistent with the language that candidate Trump expressed during
the campaign,” Former CIA director Michael Hayden said, in an interview
with Bill Maher. Hayden also says that the armed forces would simply refuse
to follow Trump's orders were he to be elected and fo... 阅读全帖
m****a
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来自主题: Military版 - 琐男们的榜样
As most films of a similar degree, Flesh Target: Rape has the one
distinction
that can be argued between parties for an eternity - displaying women in
trouble as cloyingly accepting of their molestation - dirty damsels digging
nails into their opponent. From victim number one and on, Flesh Target: Rape
takes no time turning the tables on these hapless female's sexual drives.
Screams of distress melt into vibrating coos in a blink of an eye. Some of
these dames have it harder than others, such as... 阅读全帖
l*y
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来自主题: Military版 - 连Ann Coulter也有人叫好? (转载)
【 以下文字转载自 USANews 讨论区 】
发信人: DeDeLong (dedelong), 信区: USANews
标 题: 连Ann Coulter也有人叫好?
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Mon Nov 14 09:13:49 2016, 美东)
看看她说什么了吧
In August of last year, Ann Coulter, a forerunner of the alt-right who once
seemed like a punchline and now seems like a prophet, introduced Trump at a
rally in Iowa. Coulter’s position on immigration—white nationalism,
essentially—was then outside the Overton window, and Trump was the only
candidate who embraced it. “The Republican Party’s typical positio... 阅读全帖

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你看那文笔
也想学着轻松幽默,可惜透着农村妇女的粗鄙
标题档吧和内容没有很好的衔接关系
最后的punchline 也不会设计
这种人很可悲
现实中不容易
想到个粪坑激起个浪花
智商不够
不如学丹姐马英八转帖子吧
没人看也不显着自己那样丢脸
E*V
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【 以下文字转载自 LosAngeles 讨论区 】
发信人: chairman ( 8====o ~~ /*), 信区: LosAngeles
标 题: 美国人对中国人游行抗议的看法
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun Nov 10 02:23:13 2013, 美东)
http://www.scpr.org/news/2013/11/09/40291/asian-americans-prote
The punchline came when he interviewed the Asian-American child. He was
making fun of the infantile mentality of jingoistic American pundits and
sadly, way too many Americans. Too bad too many Americans (and Chinese) are
too stupid to see it. He wasn't demeaning Chinese, he was demeaning
stupidit... 阅读全帖
d*b
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来自主题: USANews版 - 看来大家把Joe Wong都给神话了
That's because russel peters has been in the business for a long time.
Quality wise I think Joe beats him easily. Just go to youtube and pick a
random piece from Russel peters. The guy blah blah blah for 10 mins and
probably have a couple of funny lines. Joe's style is like Jay Leno or Conan
O'brien's monologue. He has a punchline almost every other line.
d*b
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PBS是公认的最boring的几个台之一,而Joe Wong说他因为无法忍受PBS节目过分煽情所
以去看c-span.言下之意c-span有多boring了。That is already a brilliant line.
Then he echoed with a even better line, 说如果看c-span还睡不着,还有cspan2和
cspan3. That's just a really well crafted joke, with double punchline.
l****z
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来自主题: USANews版 - Giuliani on Biden: “He’s a Joke”
by Jammie
Tell us something we don’t already know, Mr. Mayor.
Former New York mayor Rudy Giuliani (R) suggested Sunday that his
previous criticism of Vice President Biden might have been a little over the
top, but reiterated that he has real concerns about Biden’s gaffes on the
campaign trail and labeled the vice president “a joke.”
“Joe’s a laugh riot on Jay Leno; he’s not a vice president,” Giuliani
said on NBC’s “Press Pass.” “He’s a joke.”
Giuliani has suggested in recent days that Biden... 阅读全帖
b********n
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“I would be incredibly concerned if a President Trump governed in a way
that was consistent with the language that candidate Trump expressed during
the campaign,” Former CIA director Michael Hayden said, in an interview
with Bill Maher. Hayden also says that the armed forces would simply refuse
to follow Trump's orders were he to be elected and follow through on his
campaign promises.
Here's what Hayden had to say about Trump's promise to kill family members
of ISIS: "God, no! Let me give you a... 阅读全帖
m*****s
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来自主题: USANews版 - 想想川普也挺可怜的
被坏女人Conway及一帮川粉架秧子, 根本不知道外面是怎么回事
Donald Trump has a new target: "Crooked polls."
With Hillary Clinton extending her lead nationwide and in key battleground
states, Trump is toying with what might be called "poll denialism," giving
his supporters license to dismiss the discouraging data.
"Even the polls are crooked," he said at a Monday night rally, expressing
disbelief that he is losing to Clinton in Pennsylvania. "Look, we're in a
rigged system."
Trump has only topped Clinton in one scientifica... 阅读全帖
w***w
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来自主题: USANews版 - Donald Trump's poll denialism
所有的poll都是希拉里领先;
川普只在不限制投票次数的poll领先。
http://money.cnn.com/2016/10/12/media/donald-trump-polls/index.html
Donald Trump has a new target: "Crooked polls."
With Hillary Clinton extending her lead nationwide and in key battleground
states, Trump is toying with what might be called "poll denialism," giving
his supporters license to dismiss the discouraging data.
"Even the polls are crooked," he said at a Monday night rally, expressing
disbelief that he is losing to Clinton in Pennsylvania. "Look, we'r... 阅读全帖

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来自主题: USANews版 - 连Ann Coulter也有人叫好?
看看她说什么了吧
In August of last year, Ann Coulter, a forerunner of the alt-right who once
seemed like a punchline and now seems like a prophet, introduced Trump at a
rally in Iowa. Coulter’s position on immigration—white nationalism,
essentially—was then outside the Overton window, and Trump was the only
candidate who embraced it. “The Republican Party’s typical position is to
premptively surrender whenever liberals start yelling, ‘Ooh, that’s
mean, you can’t use that word,’ ” she told the crowd. “We... 阅读全帖
l*h
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同性恋角色明显减少,变性角色消失
https://www.thewrap.com/hollywood-straight-studio-films-lgbt-characters-
dropped-record-low-last-year/
Hollywood So Straight: Studio Films With LGBT Characters Dropped to Record
Low Last Year
Trans characters shut out, nonwhite queer characters see uptick in annual
GLAAD report
The number of Hollywood films featuring LGBTQ characters plummeted nearly 40
percent in 2017 compared to the year prior, an annual survey of the major
movie studios by GLAAD said on Tuesday.
The group fou... 阅读全帖
O****e
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来自主题: ebiz版 - 补充一句
在懒猪神医的模板之上加一条punchline,基本一棒子打倒的方法。
Please write back with your full name to confirm, and we will continue the
investigation for you. Keep in mind that this statement is a legal proof,
and either our company or Fedex or the police department may call to
inquired about the loss, and all calls will be monitored and recorded as
legal proof as well.
m********l
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kao, 莫非真的是女的?
you are wasting my punchline:
男的也行
try this one:
没关系。 在JobHunt版上, 男的都重才不重貌。
先吃饱饭重要, 是不是? WSN们
l***a
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浪花兄弟和周杰伦有一首歌《你是我的OK绷》,里面的punchline是:I kown I kown,
你是我的OK绷,在每一个时候……挺好听的,老容易上口的。
一早上去上班的时候在出租车里我就对着小臭臭来回唱。
“小臭臭,你知道‘你是我的OK绷’这句话什么意思吗?”
“就是我很好很好的意思。。。”小臭臭做臭美花痴状。
“差不多吧,妈妈不舒服的时候,你贴过来我就好了呀。”
于是小臭臭笑眯眯地对我忽然唱起来:“I know I know, 你是我的cookie bar!
u****n
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来自主题: Stock版 - S&P Says Greek Default Imminent
S&P Says Greek Default Imminent
by Tyler Durden
Time for the dominos to fall where they may: head of sovereign ratings at S&
P Kraemer spoke on Bloomberg TV, and said the following:
KRAEMER: GREECE, CREDITORS `RUNNING OUT OF TIME' IN DEBT TALKS -BBG
KRAEMER: EURO LEADERS HAVEN'T TACKLED CORE UNDERLYING PROBLEMS -BBG
KRAEMER SAYS EUROPE MUST DEAL WITH IMBALANCES, COMPETITIVENESS -BBG
And the punchline:
KRAEMER SAYS HE BELIEVES GREECE WILL DEFAULT SHORTLY - RTRS
The only thing he d... 阅读全帖
E**********r
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来自主题: Stock版 - GS 和 JPM
也谢谢punchline的推荐!
S*********g
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来自主题: Stock版 - 立此存照:郎教授的千人斩
Stock版 - 我来发一个中线的pick吧。
1
我来发一个中线的pick吧。
时间:3到6个月,30%以上的利润。
Mkt Cap>5B,风险不大,可以all in。
免费。
想要的跟贴。
spasm
2013-12-02 12:52:46
来自: 0.0.
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all in 跟
thanks. prof.!
JJCNJ
2013-12-02 12:52:55
来自: 0.0.
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谢谢
winner8888
2013-12-02 12:52:57
来自: 0.0.
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我要, Thank you,

allence
2013-12-02 12:53:06
来自: 0.0.
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pick please, thanks
happy6688
2013-12-02 12:53:16
来自: 0.0.
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thank you very much.
bigbelly
2013-12-02 12:53:25
来自: 0.0.
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thx
JesusLee
2013-12-02 12:53:25
来自: 0.0.
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re
researchba
20... 阅读全帖
m******r
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来自主题: Stock版 - 大盘到顶了
1 * accos Jul 22 Re: 觉得market到顶了
2 * Banlangen Aug 6 垃圾乱飞,大盘到顶
3 * SJP Aug 6 Re: 垃圾乱飞,大盘到顶
4 * meiyoutu Aug 6 Re: 垃圾乱飞,大盘到顶
5 * tomm29 Aug 6 Re: 垃圾乱飞,大盘到顶
6 * Banlangen Aug 6 Re: 垃圾乱飞,大盘到顶
7 * bullblade Aug 9 TSLA是不是短期快到顶了?
8 * nptraveler Aug 19 AAPL能冲到多少啊?520就到顶了吧?
9 * MacAir Aug 19 Re: AAPL能冲到多少啊?520就到顶了吧?
10 * rim Sep 3 美股到顶迹象愈浓
11 * expert Sep 3 Re: 美股到顶迹象愈浓
12 * XController Sep 3 Re: 美股到顶迹象愈浓
13 * heli007 Sep 3 Re: 美股到顶迹象愈浓
14 * jianye5 Sep 3 Re: 美股到顶迹象愈浓
15 * mRom... 阅读全帖
q******g
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来自主题: Australia版 - 这个版的人其实不少。
ifan, jsolomon, punchline,tesco2006, Jlive, 当然和以前的高峰期相比,还是有很大
差距的。
c****s
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来自主题: Georgia版 - 亚特兰大的Comedy Club
有朋友来玩,请问版上有人去过亚特兰大的Comedy Club吗?有好的推荐吗?
例如这间 http://www.punchline.com/index.asp
有人去过吗?
谢谢诸位!
f**********o
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来自主题: LosAngeles版 - 小护士故事之血泪篇 (转载)
情节是有点小破绽,但瑕不掩瑜. Art imitates life
对小护士的心理描写丝丝入扣,入木三分。
标题和开头就暗示了结局,但把twist放在最后,使悬念贯穿整篇文章。
最后的那句 punchline "我不是有病了啊" 也是一语双关,呼应主题。
实在是 bbs 近来可圈可点的一篇佳作, 哈哈 :)
c******n
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来自主题: LosAngeles版 - 美国人对中国人游行抗议的看法
http://www.scpr.org/news/2013/11/09/40291/asian-americans-prote
The punchline came when he interviewed the Asian-American child. He was
making fun of the infantile mentality of jingoistic American pundits and
sadly, way too many Americans. Too bad too many Americans (and Chinese) are
too stupid to see it. He wasn't demeaning Chinese, he was demeaning
stupidity, bigotry, blind obedience to stupid, self-serving politicians. In
other words, if you're offended, you're the butt of the joke. NOW you c... 阅读全帖
S*********g
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最后一句punchline不错
我反正是笑了
S**********s
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来自主题: GunsAndGears版 - chinese millitary shovel
Bring a shovel to combat
And dig your own grave
what a punchline.
q***x
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来自主题: GunsAndGears版 - Prepper 战友们,要警惕了
随便谈谈个人看法。
一般来说较出名的中文网站都有背后赞助,类似孔子学校,所以其小编的信息导向,你
看看该站的时事新闻版,大概应看出一些名堂,你懂的。这个网站娱乐都嫌三俗,正经
事更不用提了。西方的时事我一般看英文非主流网站,交叉参考,如ZEROHEDG
E。
该MSM文的重磅砖家是一智库人员,非一线疾病控制或研究机构的领头人物,其观点
的水平如何,各位自己看,自己想。
CDC官网都说了EBOLA病毒如果接触粘膜,如眼球,会感染。该砖家说“由于病
毒不会进入肺泡,因此所谓“埃博拉病毒可以通过空气传播”的说法缺乏科学依据。”
, 难道鼻腔气管咽喉都没有粘膜?
最新分析,
http://www.zerohedge.com/news/2014-10-13/cidrap-we-believe-ther
Who is CIDRAP? "The Center for Infectious Disease Research and Policy (
CIDRAP; "SID-wrap") is a global leader in addressing public health
preparedn... 阅读全帖
w***m
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来自主题: MJ版 - 这个不可以删!
确实是女的踢的,因为我怕弄错,还特地进去问她,她也说是她题的。
The punchline is the guy claimed his own action after. I didn't get. I
thought he got guts though.
You saw my testing action yesterday, didn't you? He actually didn't have
that type of gut!
H*****r
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Bob Knight has never shied away from controversial topics, so it was no
surprise when he started popping off about Ohio State and the NCAA during
the Henry P. Iba Citizen Athlete Awards ceremony Monday evening.
"I understand what's happened and there was a rule that was violated,"
Knight told media before he was scheduled to deliver the keynote address. "
But it was an idiotic rule."
Knight, who is currently an announcer for ESPN, was responding to the
suspensions of five Ohio State players whom... 阅读全帖
b*****a
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来自主题: NCAA版 - 他密的有阿福请进,哈哈
Joke is represented by ncaa !
这个够 punchline 质量吗?还是我没看懂?
L**********y
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来自主题: AudioBook版 - 热个身,大家来PK看图说话
木有灵感了
总之最后 punchline 打算抄 狮屎胜于熊便
中间的过程,你自己想象一下吧
l********r
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【 以下文字转载自 TVChinese 讨论区 】
【 原文由 littledear 所发表 】
同感。虽然偶也喜欢看这边的电视剧,而且的确在竞争的机制下质量比较高。
但是的确没有反映现实的。那些comedy,是在某种程度上反映了现实,但是
因为comedy性质的局限,它要搞笑,所以把人物、语言都变得很极端,比如
my favorate seinfeld。
至于现在层出不穷的大堆sitcom,偶已经可以听上句,猜下句要说什么了。
punchline就那么些,太难创新了。
而且这边电视剧除soap opera外,基本上都是单集成剧,很难把故事铺展开。
偶也一直纳闷,美国人就不想看看反映自己生活的东东吗。
象国内反映小人物的电视剧的确很多。早期的比如:
过把瘾,一地鸡毛,一年又一年,还有池莉的作品。
近一点的有:
贫嘴张大民,空镜子,结婚十年。。。
好像国内的电视剧都是有小说原著的。这边感觉主要靠编剧。
t******g
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来自主题: CouchPotato版 - Louie -- 悲衰的中年危机喜剧
is this the only joke you know from him?
racist jokes are the part of comedy...
If he can joke about White and black and Jew, why not Chinese and Asian.
"Chinese babies are ugly" is very mild, LOL
IMO, one or two punchline is fine, more and longer than that is bad
t******g
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来自主题: CouchPotato版 - Louie -- 悲衰的中年危机喜剧
is this the only joke you know from him?
racist jokes are the part of comedy...
If he can joke about White and black and Jew, why not Chinese and Asian.
"Chinese babies are ugly" is very mild, LOL
IMO, one or two punchline is fine, more and longer than that is bad
q***q
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来自主题: LeisureTime版 - 秋天的孩子小样 (转载)
哈哈哈,大家为什么都会把注意力集中在第一句呢。。。?好吧头两句是整个歌的创作
契机。所以是有这个punchline出现的早的问题。原本是希望后面的solo压一压,做一
个平衡的。
另外推荐Lou Reed的Xmas in Feburary,是这首模仿的体裁。另外一个暗中的影响应该
是Dire Straits的Private Investigation。
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zTKnwwJAfU
w***s
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我疯了,这样也能上十大,改标题ING
刚刚开始看侦探小说,先看了一本本格派,不太习惯堆砌繁冗的对错细节让读者自行判
断(画外音:因为懒),决定转向社会派。
一搜“社会派 推荐”,搜到了《白夜行》,在大kindle上是535页。
0%-65%都不错,66%-85%略有些无味,86%-100%的收尾首尾呼应。本来看到66%时,谁是
“坏人”呼之欲出,已经知道结局的故事,就把剩余的结局看下去就是了。掩卷之时,
暗自庆幸没有自以为是地在那时弃看。因为到了结尾,所有的线索都联系起来了。(PS
:数字只是感觉上的约数,不是实际的字数百分比。)
东野其实对情节的因果花了很多笔墨解释,有的情节当时就解释了,有的情节很久以后
才通过不同人对当年事件的看法解释出来,这一点在写文时,是我常常犯的错误,以为
读者能看懂,就不多作解释。以为情景需要把读者混淆,就故意混淆着写。但得到的结
果只是读者觉得情节一团乱。明显觉得你丫懒得写了,随便给个转折结尾了事。
现在同时在看二月河的《乾隆皇帝》(太长了,kindle上3K页)和一些侦探小说,发现
这2个长篇都有一些共同的特质,一个是该用新人物就用,该扔掉旧人物就扔,... 阅读全帖
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来自主题: LeisureTime版 - 东方式的情感表述
写的真好,我语言贫乏,一直想不出怎么准确描述听林志炫的《烟花易冷》的感觉,你
的描述很到位。
赞“浑然天成”,这个是关键,赞“铺垫,提升”,这个是必要的过程。最后终究还是
追求一个punchline的,“暮然回首, 那人却在,灯火阑珊处”。
e***t
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来自主题: LeisureTime版 - 张岭的喝酒blues
没觉得这算twist...顶多算个punchline吧
q***q
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从前慢比较特别。里面“一生只够爱一个人”和“你锁了别人就懂了”当然是
punchline了,但是整体说歌词太短,没有那段哼哼也就是两分钟的量,此外不少词感
觉不适合放在歌里。感觉可以做一个专辑的第一首引子。
Tom Waits有些歌倒是这样的,比如"no one knows i'm gone"
以及“bend down the branches”
但是在歌词的韵律上好像就要好些。
c******n
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你就不要执著的把自己当成笑话里的puncline了
那些所谓的"演员""演"了史上最卖座的电影, 没一人在oscar上饭他们, 连名字都不认
识, 你这个笑话还以为cameron没有威胁到电影界的生存?
你这个punchline也太大了
S*M
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来自主题: PhotoGear版 - A man is dating 3 women (zt)
我看到punchline才想起来原来看过这个笑话
btw, 前阵子看comedy central
有个老美standup comedian讲猎人和熊的故事
不知道原创是中国的还是美国的?
b*******s
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来自主题: PhotoGear版 - Top 20 Worst Wedding Photos
http://weddingpros.wordpress.com/2009/05/29/top-20-worst-weddin
#20 – The Arranged Marriage
Nothing says, ‘This is not the person I want to marry.” quicker than the
scowl of a groom and an arranged marriage between two unhappy adults.
#19 – The Bride’s Number One
Believe it or not, brides have to go potty too. However, there normally isn
’t documentation of the event.
#18 – Disdain
Not sure what happened previous to this shot, but we’re guessing the groom
simply isn’t happy about something. Co... 阅读全帖
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